Analysis of Edge.



On the edge she sits and waits.
 With eternal silence she anticipates.

Her heart beats fast as her sorrow flows
 The questions she couldn't ask, the stories she never told.

Oceans afar so sparkling and blue.
 Her mind is made up, what else can she do?

She prayed for wings so she may fly,
  But if she takes a leap, she may die.

She closes her eyes and squeezes them tight,
 Hoping that she might just take flight.

The wind blows fast with a sudden gust of fright,
 She sits back on the edge to continue her plight.


Scheme AA XX BB CC DD DD
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1011101 1010101010 011110101 01011010101101 100111001 0111111111 11111111 111101111 1100101011 10111111 01111010111 111101101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 509
Words 98
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on July 12, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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