Analysis of Drinking Song



Across a gulf
the cooling beams burst from behind
clouds. Nothing is set.

I wrap you in blankets
like the woman who sleeps in
a wheelchair outside
the closed souvenir store.

When it opens we turn
to shore and gather shells.
I can barely hold what I find and you
have no trouble with one at a time,

singing, while you dance across the bridge,
a song of waves but not the song itself.


Scheme XXX XXXX XXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 01011101 11011 111010 1010110 0111 01011 111011 110101 1110111101 111011101 101110101 0111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 370
Words 74
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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