Analysis of dream machine



A winter of snow that grew so cold
Cars together seeing strangers heading home
On the road to the humble abode

Now we all call,for every day events in the grand digital information hall
Masters of the universe without no fall
Alone in the cosmos of dreams in awe

Create a space for me
of my desires a reality
a time where we can all dream in infinity

To give my body to everlasting wonder
To our body's whole & see our body die no longer
To not have any worries in love to grow stronger

Will we sacrifice it to machines and see a transcendence of our soul
To a new world,fragile n cold
Should our desire grow so bold

Now pulled back the veil
Has begun to reveal another trail

A twisting tree, its roots within its core are so deep
Growing seasonally ever free

Time no longer counting away whats frail
For now the ticking has begun calling for me,my mind in a blue ocean with no where to sail.


Scheme AXX BBX CCC DDD XAA EE XC EE
Poetic Form
Metre 010111111 10101010101 101101001 11111001010011000101 1010100111 0100101101 010111 11010010 011111100100 11110101010 110101110101110 1111010011110 111011010100101101 101111 110010111 11101 1011010101 0101110111111 101000101 1110100101 11010101101110011011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 872
Words 176
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 18, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edward Gonzalez

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