Analysis of dream 069



Ancient burning fire sets aflame
Touching soul & soul loving are to blame
In her spotlight forever in fame

The whole world can churn at may
As long as she doesnt turn away
More than body and mind i want to see our souls at play

To infuse memory,emotions,ideas in love
It comes diligently an epiphany puriest of doves

Both we walk towards a black hole
Our uncertain future leads our new soul
At last our light guides us whole

Souls glimmering slow
There's almost no flow
Life has dimmed its mysterious glow

Relationships,connections afar from on far
Seems so distant its like reaching for a star

Greed & lust have become the mimes of the day
Free & just are dreams and wines far off away
Forever to be teased just for the stay
To go into the void & never return to what may?

Pleasures or dreams it seems
But wait dont we have these
Already themes

Asleep or awake,no choice pick with ease
Will you see like thee
Oh please cause if you dont then we're already deceased.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 941
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on August 17, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edward Gonzalez

I see love n life in new ways now that im truly awake these daysWich have led me to write with sway. more…

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