Analysis of don't ever leave me



White roses placed upon my wrist
A hand to hold,and lips to kiss
Butterflies, ominous

Awkward silence caressing dinner
Slowing time makes patience thinner.

Leaving time arrives too late
But Arrival makes me appreciate
Walking in,freezing cold
Dancing close,memories mold.

Night is closing,midnight's invitation
We have reached our destination
Embrace quick and reminisce the day
Before I go home, and you drive away.

Tomorrow beats yesterday by a mile
The sun rose high with a childish smile
The evening cast a magical spell
Four minus two make an uncomfortable scene
A question
An answer.
A brightening face.

Theaters contribute to conversation
Icy fingertips,sweaty palms
Credits roll up the screen
Cautious lips peck,grinning teeth gleam
Hold me close, don't ever leave me be.

I'm glad that I met you
No matter where this goes
I'm happier than ever
And I'm sure that it shows.

It started on a bus.
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Scheme XXA BB CCDD EEFF GGXHEBX EXHXX XIBI AB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 0111111 10100 101001010 10111010 1010111 101011010 1011 1011 111010 11110010 01100101 0111101101 01110101 011110101 010101001 110111010001 010 110 01001 1000101010 1011 101101 101111 111110111 111111 110111 1100110 011111 110101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 882
Words 155
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 4, 7, 5, 4, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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