Analysis of Don'T correct me with red ink
DON'T CORRECT ME WITH RED INK
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If he was Summer
I was Winter
If he was sunshine
I was night - a dark and stormy one.
My friend
Did you hear lightning storms can be very striking?
Don't worry
Keep calm and here take my umbrella
Remember that - wherever you go,
I will be there
I know
You are mist defying
Please don't correct me with red ink
You know Its cold outside
When you go outside
Its cold
~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~
| Scheme | A BBXX XC XDEX ECAFFX D |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011111 1 11110 1110 1111 111010101 11 111101111010 110 110111010 010101011 1111 11 111010 11011111 111111 11111 11 110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 431 |
| Words | 84 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 6, 2, 4, 6, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 19 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 64 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
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Submitted on February 24, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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