Analysis of Discouraged



Why do I feel so all alone
And the hurt is so strong
Wishing I could start all over
Because my life is so wrong

I am so stressed out
And I don't know where it started
Why am I so sad inside
And feeling heavy-hearted

Sometimes life stinks
But, it can be changed
So, i'm putting god first
Before it gets rearranged

There is a sadness in my heart
That won't go away
So, I pray and ask the lord for help
Each and every day


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11111101 001111 10111110 0111111 11111 01111110 1111101 0101010 0111 11111 111011 011101 11010011 11101 111010111 101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 403
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on November 20, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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