Analysis of Desert Stainless



That’s what the billboard ad said, anyway,
along the freeway heading out of town.
Coming after “Girls Of Rock N Roll”
and “Hottest Slots”, it seemed appropriate.

Not just the dicey, spicy, sex-on-a-platter,
tawdry flatware of the town, I thought,
but something cleaner. No real harm in Vegas,
nothing, at least, with which one's spirit can’t cope.

But solitary pleasures are the best.
Why share the crowd with the crowd?
Better to share a world with none than with all.
Better alone with yourself than alone with others.

Next time, when the flock flies south, I think
I'll head out north, into the desert stainless.


Scheme XXXX XXAX XXXX XA
Poetic Form
Metre 11011110 010110111 101011111 0101110100 110101011010 10110111 11010111010 10111111011 110010101 1101101 10110111111 1001101101110 111011111 11110101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 614
Words 105
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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