Analysis of Delicate Whispers



As light catches the stretch of invitation in the dawn's glance I find her embrace,
beautiful quiet warmth inside the throes of cool spiralled freedom,
buxom splendour lifts up the spirit's wild colour,
I'm overwhelmed by life's wondrous scent and love's passionate wisdom,
the world's soft activity is lost within silent folds of her magical face,
sentimental kisses reach for rhythm's ardour.

Answers are found in sighs
while personalities sweep minds
into the realms of excitement's fresh possibility.

Sensuality's pulse we will swirl fine memory within and forever chase,
eternity's a fingertip away in history's chasm,
blossoms of sweet humanity twirl with fervour;
enthusiastic steps across the wings of a brand new poem,
this spellbound melodic time of fluttered simplicity we will never erase,
our bodies seek the quality of nature.

Deeper meanings find eyes;
as furious as loving winds
which lift us cleanly into Heaven's vast garden gently.

Ghostly moans roam above relaxation's delicate whispers of buttered content,
fragments of reality merge with fantasy as we return to the present.


Scheme ABCBAC DXE ABCBAC DXE XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011010001111001 100101010111110 1011101011 101111010110010 01101001101101101001 010101111 101101 1010011 01011110100 1111111000100101 101001010010 10110100111 001010101101110 1101011100100111001 101010100110 101011 11001101 11110011011010 10110111001011010 101101110011011010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,077
Words 171
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 6, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 179
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on January 22, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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