Analysis of Deadline



If it were a door
that needed to be opened
I could have used
this day, this morning
to cure my silence
beyond repair.

But if I'm going to be given
the opportunity
to slip my dissention
incognito through wires
across bridges
I'll take it and sit here
thinking of a neon sign
with which I could toast the sky

like quick summer lightning
behind heavy freight barges
passing each other in the bay

the walk home is filled with wind and laughter


Scheme XXXAXX BXBXCXXX ACX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 1101110 1111 11110 11110 0101 111101110 00100 1111 0010110 0110 111011 1010101 1111101 111010 0110110 10110001 0111111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 422
Words 83
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 3, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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