Analysis of Darling (by Deborah Rose)



Between a dry rose petal dust
 Between the sheets of paper
 And a soft, single dream
 How many minutes …
 ‘Slow motion' stream.

Silken is the thread, hushed is the dawn
 When listless night ends and
 Tomorrow turns into a morn….
 Whispering it with a rose, with a sigh
 Thankful that we never said ‘goodbye'.

Weave me the dream silken as the thread
 Leave me a song with a ‘slow motion' stream
 Then you will see some rose petal dew
 Slowly weaving in, I'm praying the dream
 With which softly to say ‘Thank you'.

~I love you~


Scheme XXAXA XXXBB XACAC C
Poetic Form
Metre 01011101 0101110 001101 11010 1101 101011101 110110 0110101 1001101101 10111011 110110101 1101101101 111111101 1010011001 11101111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 526
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on November 23, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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