Analysis of Cotton crop blues



Cotton worker blues
The brilliant sun bursts open,
Flooding the dry brown fields,
Shining brightly like a candle.

Wax dripping down the sides,
Yellow rays of purity bleaches
The skin of the workers
A brilliant red
Or shade of black

A symbol of grit and greatness
Coupled with hard work,
The sweat glints
Opaque in the summer light,

The labourers labour over their produce
Only to give it to the master
Who greedily sells it pays gives nothing in return.
They are worn ragged by work,
Their backs,
Evidence of the whip
Gaping wounds
Infected,
Puss seeping out,
Someone has to be a breadwinner
In this society of unfairness
Draped in a cloak of respectability,

The sun sets.
Spilled scent gets caught in the wind.
Floats off into the distance
Disappears...

The crops sway bedraggled in the wind.
Whistling a tune of sadness as it waltzes.


Scheme AXXX XAXXX BCAX XDXCXXXXXDBX XEXX EX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 0101110 100111 10101010 110101 10111001 011010 0101 1111 01011010 10111 011 0100101 01110101 101111010 1100111110001 1111011 11 100101 101 010 1101 1111010 0101001010 1001100100 011 1111001 1101010 01 011010001 10011101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 811
Words 146
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 12, 4, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tom Breakwell

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