Analysis of Control Will Take a Soul



Control, control, more control,
Long enough to take my soul,
A hateful heart gone bad,
Over the edge, never to be restored.

Don't be one who takes sides,
Hate has shattered my world,
Threads connecting have gone slack,
Happiness is to not look back.

Control killed my love,
Once delicate and sweet,
No more stifling of my life,
Chrushed beneath one's feet.


Scheme AAXX XXBB XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 0101101 1011111 010111 1001101101 111111 111011 1010111 10011111 01111 110001 1110111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 345
Words 62
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Omajean Lewis

Born in Oklahoma during the Dust Bowl days, growing up during the early days of the Texas Oil Fields observing WW11 as a child, graduating from high school and marrying in the early fifties, raising two children, Tonya and Brenton through the sixties and seventies and taking care of her parents and parent-in-law through the nineteen nineties has given Oma Lewis a unique perceptive on life. When not busy traveling and enjoying her family with her husband Dalton of 59 years, Oma is active as an artist, photographer, and writer. more…

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