Analysis of Come, Come Closer to Me Before I Die



Nothing, nothing that I wanted in this life
Full of cares, worries, hurries and strife
A change came in me, when I saw you
When you came here near my view
Then suddenly my heart stated uttering
O my darling, my heart is beating
For you I am waiting
I love you, don't you love me?
Is there anyone in your life or only me?
No one can love more than I can
If you don't believe me
Then you are free to leave me
But you can understand and scan
To love you I am the only man
There are many men in the world
But it's me who value you more than gold
With you I am ready to bear Death's sting
O my darling my heart is beating
For you I am waiting
Come, come in my life
Like a dropp of water in thirsty man's mouth
Forget every differences and divide of north and south
Cross every border and boundary line
Come and have a bottle of wine
In the stary, romantic, moonlit night
By the earliest possible flight
Double my happiness and delight
Come, come before the end of night
We will enjoy hearty talking
O my darling, my heart is beating
For you I am waiting
Don't make any excuse or tell a lie
Come, come closer to me before I die
Nothing, nothing that I wanted in this life
Full of cares, worries, hurries and strife

Shashikant Nishant Sharma 'साहिल'
==========©SNS==21 September 2004=Patna==========


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,267
Words 250
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 35, 2
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 495
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted on May 11, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shashikant Nishant Sharma 'साहिल'

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