Analysis of Cold Shoulders



He turns away from me
his naked back like a fortress
which I dare not enter.

My eyes, my mind, like silent missiles
try to penetrate and crumble
the thick walls of his shoulders.

I close my eyes---I retreat.
There will be no conflict tonight;
no war will be won
great or small.
Similarly, none will be lost.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11011010 111110 111111010 1110010 0111110 1111101 11111001 11111 111 10001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 297
Words 58
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mwalimu

My name is Theresa, I love to write and read poetry. My favourite poet is Billy Collins. I am mainly inspired to write by everyday happenings or feelings, and I often write with some humour or sarcasm. My travel experiences have also influenced my writing, some of my favourite places to travel have been Cuba, Tanzania, Uganda, and South Africa. I was born in Canada but I am now living and teaching in the Middle East. Please feel free to leave comments or suggestions on any of my poems. more…

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