Analysis of Cloves

Neil McLeod 1947 (Oxford)



Set in the Indian Ocean,
Off the African coast, but not far,
There's a fertile oasis surrounded by sea-
The Island of Zanzibar.

This mystical tropical haven
Set with palaces, palms and a fort,
Is dotted with trees that bear a spice
Which for centuries long has been sought.

The Caesars had seen it imported,
Though they knew not from whence it came.
They brought it by galley from Palestine
To relieve their dental pain.

This valuable spice was transported
By caravan over the sand,
From a port in the south of Arabia
And by dough from that far distant land.

The seeds of this spice have a fragrant oil,
An obtundant for which many strove.
We know the oil as Eugenol,
The remarkable spice is the clove.


Scheme ABXB AXXX XXXX XCXC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10010010 101001111 101001001011 010110 110010010 111001001 110111101 111001111 010111010 11111111 111110110 1011101 110011010 1101001 10100110100 011111101 0111110101 1111101 110111 001001101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 689
Words 129
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by NeilMcLeod on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Neil McLeod

Born in Oxford, raised in Kenya, past winner of Los Slamgeles Poetry Slam and author of abitingchance.blogspot.comand "The First Thanksgiving".Doctor McLeod is a performing poet who has recited at Highland Games, dinners and Burns Nights for the last 36 years. He is happily married, lives and works in Los Angeles,has three children, and practices as a dentist on Sunset Boulevard:http://www.drneilmcleod.com/He can be contacted by e-mail at drneilmcleod@yahoo.com and will willingly entertain requests to share his work with permission. more…

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