Analysis of Cassava Dreams



My village was small, yet not lacking,
Humble made a home amongst us.
My mother's cassava touched tongues the sweetest.
Maybe because our hands
Gave it life.
My hands...

I dreamt of my life within the fields,
And slept with a quiet relief of piece,
As a plague crept and trampled cassava dreams,
Ripped out my heart,
Took my life.
My hands...

My life's their armor, dispensable.
Humble hearts now vicious with brown-brown.
My tongue was heavy as blood flooded those fields,
Because of my hands.
Stole sweet life.
My hands...

*Cassava is a main staple in regions of Africa, a country with an estimated 120,000 child soldiers.*Brown-brown is a gun powder based drug used to control these children.


Scheme xxxabA cxxxbA xxcabA x
Poetic Form
Metre 110111110 10101011 110111010 1001101 111 11 111110101 0110100111 101101011 1111 111 11 111100100 101110111 11110111011 01111 111 11 1101100101100010111001101110110111101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 677
Words 121
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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