Analysis of Bumble Bee Attack (Poem No. 508)
Haiku form 5-7-6 posted 508
Bumble Bee attack,
Dozens of them on my back;
Humming all around.
Never mess their nest,
They will not put you at rest;
Might as well retreat!
You can run, as fast
As you can, but you can't hide,
Lost them in zigzag.
You would not believe,
when you are under attack
You'll pick up quick speed.
By Ms. Ging
02-26-13
Comment:
Buble Bee Attack:
This piece is inspired
of my past by gone days,
In the farm in which
I run into the Bumble bee's nest.
I was alone just me and
my Lord. I was attacked
backward, sideways and forward;
running like crazy, Jumping like flea.
Like a feet touch on the heat,
screaming, hitting, rolling
Praying out loud for help.
I killed few but there were more
than I could tackle or judo.
Then God came to my rescue.
My prayers been answered;
He saved my life.
God made the bumble bee,
flee away from me;
Suddenly, they were all turning back,
Leaving me in peace in verge of heart attack!
I was shaking like leaves,
Thanks to God The Almighty I Serve!
Scheme | X AAX BBC XXX XAX DX XAEXXBXXEFCDXXXXEXFFAAXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10110 10101 1011111 10101 10111 1111111 11101 11111 1111111 11010 11101 1111001 11111 111 1 10 1101 111010 111111 00101 110101011 1101110 111101 101010 101101011 1011101 101010 101111 1111101 1111011 1111110 11110 1111 110101 10111 100101101 10101011101 111011 111001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 964 |
Words | 191 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 24 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 110 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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