Analysis of Brown eyes (revised)



Your brown beautiful eyes stare at me with a dept of unknown proportions,
Your smile penetrates the solitude I force myself to keep,
Your touch caresses my thoughts and every breath,
Your words entangle my judgment which induces me to lose my mind,
Your modesty reaches into my chest and mends my soul,
Your precision can define the periphery of my spirit,
Your tender soft lips make me lose my sanity,
Your every element allows me realize one truth, that I love you.


Scheme ABCDEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 111001111101101010 111001011111 110101101001 11010110101011111 11001001110111 1010101001001110 110111111100 110010001110111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 460
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 376
Words per stanza (avg) 83
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Melissa Torres

These are but written photos of my life, my mind, and those around me captured as best as I could in words. I'm not a trained writer so my style is of no particular way. I have long detailed poems and short to the point ones. My hope is that you can see what I have seen feel what i felt with out braking your head trying to figure out what I meant. Enjoy! more…

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