Analysis of broken wings



as i was sleeping
i heard you cry
 i ask you
angel ,from the sky ,why do you cry?
i won't tell you a lie
the reason i cry is because
 my wing is broken and i can't fly
and i can't get to heaven and i might die


Scheme ABCBBDBB
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 1111 111 101011111 111101 01011101 111100111 01111100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 202
Words 49
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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