Analysis of Brittle Shade



No longer I await this dream,
Where shadows drown,
These tedious mountains,
From the shine; of heavens crown,

And once more,
I may plant this severed root,
Where droplets never reach,
The burdened and foul fruit.

5/20/2013 ~ Erwin Jung


Scheme XAXA XBXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 111 110010 1011101 011 1111101 110101 010011 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 227
Words 40
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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