Analysis of Breaking Heart



Why do you do this to me?
The metal called you pierces my heart.
You break it in two,
Then squish it with your shopping cart.

Why can't you love me
Like you used to.
Now that we're together,
I'll I do is rue.

I'll get away one day,
Fly away from here,
And when that day comes
I won't shed a single tear.

You are horrible and it is over,
Don't beg for me, you lier.
All this breaking up with you...
I'm starting to tire.

You say you always loved me,
But how can this be true?
You threw my heart on the ground,
Stomped it into the dew.

I'll never come back, you punk.
Why would I? Your a butt head.
I really don't care if
My friends think breaking up with you is as dumb as led.

They didn't go through you,
And I won't let them, 'cause you're a leach.
Get away from me!
You mind as well be a peach.

Anyway, I hate you,
And I'll get a restraining order if you stay.
I don't care how or when it happens
But one day, you'll pay.


Scheme ABCB ACDC EXXX DDCD ACXC XFXF CGAG CEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1111111 01011111 11101 11111101 11111 1111 111010 11111 110111 10111 01111 1110101 1110001110 111111 1110111 110110 111111 111111 1111101 110101 1101111 1111011 110111 1111011111111 110111 011111101 10111 1111101 10111 011001010111 111111110 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 892
Words 192
Sentences 20
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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