Analysis of Bottle in the Sand



I put my heart into a bottle,
And watched it float away.
Not knowing whether currents,
Would find you one sweet day.
My love has crossed an endless sea,
Aching for its return to me.
And now I watch as waves hit land,
For my bottle in the sand.


Scheme ABCBDDEE
Poetic Form
Metre 111101010 011101 1101010 111111 11111101 10110111 01111111 1110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 236
Words 49
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on January 13, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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