Analysis of Blurb about love/the thirst (rhymes, supposed to be a rap but it didn't do the thing so)
i still feel part of me is missing
kissing you feels true and wipes away the blues
i'm cracking up over here when you're not near
and i hate myself, where's miss independent?
i try my best to see these feelings and transcend them
cause i wear you round my neck just like a pendant
you're more than a friend and with you i'm in heaven
this is a fantasy to me, you don't exist
and i'm waiting, writing, crying, dying as the emptiness persists
sighing all the time with the life in my hands
as life makes its demands i stand attentive
finding love is my only incentive
to leave my bed instead of resting my head all day
and i try to pray the thirst away
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111110 10111010101 11011011111 011111010 1111111100011 111111111010 111010111010 110100111101 01101010101010001 10101101011 11110111010 1011110010 1111011101111 011110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 637 |
Words | 128 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 7 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 170 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 43 |
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Submitted on October 08, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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