Analysis of Black woman hidden pain



Young woman with 3kids and tears
Baby father a loser doing 20 years

How do you hold on,please give me your strength
Because you look stern and humble ,not
Mad and weak

Young woman give me your strength

There's no way your suppose to be on your own
And all that pain you wish it was GONE

THE pressure for a young black woman is high
And with 3kids your barley getting by

Young woman give me your strength

Young black woman please stay strong and keep moving forward
Because after the Strom the sunshine pushes towards

Young woman with 3kids

Watch you shine and one day your prince will
Save you ,and you two shall build together

And don't cry just move forward ...Love you always

Black woman with 3kids


Scheme xx axx A xx bb A xx c xx x c
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 1010010101 111111111 011110101 101 1101111 11110111111 011111111 01010111011 011110101 1101111 1110111011010 011001011001 11011 111011111 1101111010 0111110111 11011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 132
Sentences 2
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on June 16, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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