Analysis of being real



You can ways count on me
 We met cause of destiny
We ride or die for each other like it should be
men hate cause they can’t have you or me
True friend for and eternity
Not blood related
But we bonded by two lady’s
That god blessed them to have us as baby.
Facing life with kids that drive us crazy
Yet we maintain on a everyday bases
Never needing a man as are kids we raising
True women to the game men that cant support there kids is lame
Don’t tell me that my family you can maintain
When you can’t even for a pack of diapers pay
men you lame is a shame that my kids get a check and the bills they help pay
men be gone go upon your way
 I want a man that the bills he can pay And me maintain
I want to feel like the women back in the days
 that shit they had to pay cause a man new his place
I want a man that leaves a trace that no other man can replace
Till them I’ll hold my shit down with my girl that never lets me down
And if I ever fall is there to pick me up off the ground….


Scheme AAAAABCAACDEFGGGFCCCHI
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111100 111111101111 111111111 11100100 11010 1110111 1111111110 1011111110 11011010110 101001111110 110101111011111 111111001101 1111010111001 111101111101001111 11110111 11011011110101 111110101001 111111101111 110111011110111 1111111111110111 011101111111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 977
Words 214
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 762
Words per stanza (avg) 214
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ornelia A Nivar

i am a singel mom that has a littel girl that has a.d.d and a.d.h. as well as a hirper tendence disorder. but i try to do what i can with what i have to keep us whole and together with the grace of god. because with him all is possible. more…

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