Analysis of Beautiful Sadness



Once upon a time
I gazed at the face of a beautiful sadness
She invited me into her temple
Transported me there
By crystal blue tears
Pored from her goblet
Stinging
Ripping me from the fabric of my time

I walked down her hallways
Stumbled through her darkness
Searched for hidden passages
Grasped at invisible door knobs
"Please
Let me see a glimpse of eternity!"

A clear voice flowed down the hall
Color from shadow transformed her walls
I followed unable to speak
Within her sanctuary
Answers
I chose to seek

There in the temple of her mind
From a broken Alter I dined
Unsure what mystery I would find
I felt my preconceptions
Slowly unwind

The sadness I felt
Had been my own
I had traveled many paths alone
The broken Alter was my heart of stone
That had led me away from another's throne

I looked out the windows of her soul
Seen my own face drenched in tears
It seems her eyes were actually mirrors
In that moment I lost my fears
As I gazed at the face of a beautiful sadness


Scheme ABXXCXXA XBXXXD XXEDFE GGGXG XHHHH XCFXB
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 111011010010 1010101010 01011 11011 11010 10 1011010111 11101 101010 1110100 11010011 1 1110110100 0111101 10110101 11001011 010100 10 1111 10010101 10101011 011100111 1110010 1001 01011 1111 111010101 0101011111 11110110101 111010101 1111101 1101010010 01101111 1111011010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 946
Words 186
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 6, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on April 08, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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