Analysis of As if I was the one to surwive a war

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



Do I have to die for what I believe?
Do I have to be killed just because I live?
Yes, cause that's what they want
Cause with their blood I have no bond

Do I have to deny existence of my child?
Do I have to steal just to stay alive?
Yes, cause it's the only way to surwive
Although I already have been classified

Don't I have right to believe?
Devoring my friend to live
Seeing a girl that was raped
Memories in people engraved

Even if I somehow get through
How do I live with killing you?
Just so I could surwive another day
Was I right? What will you say?


Scheme ABXX XBAX ABXX CCDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1111111101 11111110111 111111 11111111 111101010111 1111111101 111010111 110101110 1111101 11111 1001111 10001001 1011111 11111101 111110101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 541
Words 113
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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