Analysis of Are We Officially Over ?



Are we officially over now and nothing can get us back,
Our family and friends almost tried everything to get us back
But nothing really worked out yet so we are both along now.

We went to the bar where we met after drinking a few shots,
And laughing out loud as if we knew each other before shots
Made us falling in love and taking the jacket of saddens away.

Now we are back siting in the same chairs drinking our tears
Instead and crying so quietly so none of us hear our aches,
Trying to create a map of our tears to get us back in love again.

Still remember your message that you throw it to me with your
Number so I replied to you with a text saying let's wait until thur
So we waited for a few minutes to turn at twelve to Thursday.

How funny that you did the think the same with a woman who
She sit near by me and you throw to her the same message who
Got your old phone number which was the same one when I heard you missing me.

I recall the moment when you attacked me in a dark corner,
Where I shamelessly kissed you without knowing your
Name yet but I swear to God that you were a great kisser.

Tears on my chain to see you siting there by your self
And crying of smelling the scent that find it by yourself
Now you are imaging it again with tears in your closing eyes.

I'm still wondering if he does remember our first dance on the floor,
We both danced in a world who wouldn't allowed a heart breaker fear
On every women who really does love her man until he dies.

Stop making me feel you sad of seeing you asking other women
To dance with you and they all refused because you are not the man
Whom I still have the same space I kept for your warm heart.


Scheme AAX BBC XXX DEC FFX EDE GGH DXH XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101001010101111 101000111101111 110101111111011 111011111010011 010111111110011 11100101001011001 111110001110101 01010110011111101 1010101110111110101 101011011111111 101101111011011011 111010110111111 110111010110101 111110111001101 111110110111111101 110101101100110 111001101101 11111111100110 1111111101111 01011001111101 1111001011101101 111001110101011101 1110011100101101 11001011011010111 11011111101101010 1111011010111101 1111011111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,650
Words 338
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on April 02, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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