Analysis of Another Dead Kiss



And I whispered passion's stuttered surprise
across your naked exploration's breath,
a universe of swirled vision collapsed
while curved scenes pressed desire into pages
that tomorrow would open and read with
gentle tranquillity, delicate smiles.
Exhaled sections of the present fluttered
through a fine mist and joined the past's finesse.
I saw steps that wandered into a leap,
and I followed without hesitation.

All those moons that have since swept the sky dry
are now wrapped in memory's silk casket,
I wish you'd not removed yourself from love
but sadly that was to be the truth's call.
Where are you now pops fate within cool dreams
as poetry stumbles into the depths
of wild flowered prose; unfurled words of pain.

Skin wept beauty while caresses dived down
to splashed erotic rippled sensations,
fingertips flapped vitality's laughter
as trickles of destiny roared wisdom,
waterfalls of magical scent crashed waves
against destinations while currents of
imagination edged along warm shores
where our captivation awaited us,
such wonderful emotions gathered time
and slipped us past Heaven's feathered angels.

All those wet sunsets which have come and gone
are now buried in the back of this mind,
I wish you had not vanished so quickly
but alas that was indeed the cruel way.
Where did you go sings a cold villanelle
as structured sentences hang from the bars
of another dead kiss that tortures me.


Scheme XXXXXXXXXX XXABXXX XXXXXAXXXX XXCXBXC
Poetic Form
Metre 01101101 011100101 010111001 11110100110 101110011 1011001 0110101010 1011010101 1111100101 011001010 1111111011 11101110 1111010111 1101111011 1111110111 1100100101 1110101111 1110101011 1101010010 101110 1101100110 101100111 010101101 001010111 11010101 1100010101 0111101010 111111101 1110001111 1111110110 10111010101 11111011 1101001101 1010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,373
Words 231
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 7, 10, 7
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 288
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on August 14, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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