Analysis of Allegiance



Beware of how you pledge allegiance.
Oaths of loyalty, once sworn
Are not forsworn so easily,
You must abide their long result.
For there exist two countries only
And they barely touch, as much
As outside ever touches inside
Of a ring on which allegiance
To one's only love one swears
Forevermore. Take care, take care,

Just how and where you give your heart.
It cannot brook for long two states,
A single loyalty divided,
But must be indivisible.
It cannot love them equally:
Not the falcon and the robin,
Nor the city and the village,
Not the anthem and the folksong,
Nor the mountain and the meadow.
You must choose. For one, not two,

Is yours: the lowlands and the highlands
Lie contiguous but bounded.
None can take two separate roads,
Nor truly call two homelands home.
And though you may attempt to stray
Toward another, soon or later
You will know within your heart,
You walk that land an alien.
Allegiance means the soul must be
A citizen of but one country.


Scheme AXBXBXXAXX CXDXBEXXXX XDXXXXCEBB
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Metre 011111010 1110011 1111100 11011101 110111010 0110111 111101001 10111010 1110111 11111 11011111 11011111 010100010 1110100 11011100 10100010 10100010 1010001 1010001 1111111 11010010 10100110 1111101 1101111 01110111 010101110 1110111 11111100 01010111 010011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 938
Words 174
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 255
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

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