Analysis of airplane streams



airplane streams and my eyes closed
the repetition of the metallic shell
supines to the sand floor

the distant traffic hovers through my ears
and shores the reverbing hum of the motor wave
like this industrial breathing

the seabirds sway past like silhouettes
they impress the foundries of light below
while my eyelids closed

daguerrotypes with out silver breath
wipe out its chrome and galvanized stones
and sun shone its yellow gold

and sand(ra) lifts her liquid house
and constructs her castles with thremos cups

what a day


Scheme AXX XXX XXA XXX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 0010100101 11011 0101010111 0101110101 11010010 0111101 1010101101 1111 111101 11110101 0111101 01110101 001010111 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 512
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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i once read a poem by neruda, and it touched me to a point that propoelled my interest. and then i read althuzer by vicente huidobro whereby a man parachuted from the sky and the world unfolded into his poetic epic and it took me to a different place different from my ignorant geography of poetry. but then jorge luis borges blew my mind and made poetry not only about truth but utter sublime fiction amidst an exploded horizon- boundless literature off a free falling cliff and the only thing to do was grow wings in midair and take the ride. more…

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