Analysis of Absence make the heart goes ponder (Poem No. 572
I don't feel good
when I don't hear from you.
My thought wonder
Of what's going on with you.
I don't feel comfortable in day two
without a word coming from you.
My heart murmur and tremble,
Like broken rhythm of a trombone.
Luckily so far you always appear on day three.
That's quiet a big relief from my misery.
I pray you will always be okay
On the days when you can't contact me.
You have told me back then
When many days, like Ten;
If you are not appearing
Something is terribly happen.
It means, it's time to start lighting up a candle,
While all the correspondence place in the cradle.
I would be in my little secret garden,
Solemnly sitting down alone reminiscing...
I would be thinking our past bye gone days;
In deep thought of you thinking you are always the best...
I will read your cards and letters
Just to make me feel better.
So, when many days without hearing from you,
Feeling nostalgic when there's nothing in view.
Hope you are not playing missing person..
Just so I would think something have gone wrong.
When the phantom of ten days comes
Once I lit the candle at once....
If you'll re appear again in our love garden,
It would be too late to be together again.
I am not comfortable around ghost.
Who appear and disappear like a smoke.
If you chose to play like this all the time,
My Dear, bear the consequences that's bind.
By Ms.Ging
Written 06-06-13
Finalized July 24,2013
Scheme | XABA AACX DDED FFGH CCHG XXXB AAHX XXHF XXXX EHX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 111111 1110 1110111 1111000011 01011011 1110010 110101001 100111101111 110010111100 1111111 10111111 111111 110111 1111010 10110010 111111101010 11001010010 11101101010 10010101010 11110101111 011111011101 11111010 1111110 11101011011 10010111001 1111101010 1111110111 10101111 11101011 1110101010110 111111101001 1111000011 101001101 1111111101 111010011 11 10 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,362 |
Words | 261 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 108 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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