Analysis of abandoned



where does this path I walk leed to from here
I am so lost and so filled with fear
I use to be such a confident man
now I feel abandoned in a very strange land
I was so strong with you by my side
so full of dreams and beaming with pride
but now that your gone I'm lost for what to do
because every thing I did i did it for you
but lonelyness has taken it's toll
i'm an empty man without any goals
so I trug forward for day to day
praying to God theres a better way
I hope he will guide me back to the light
and make all the wrongs in my life
all be alright


Scheme ABCDEEFFGHIIJKJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 111101111 1111101001 111010001011 111111111 111101011 11111111111 0110011111111 1111011 1110101101 111101111 101110101 1111111101 01101011 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 542
Words 123
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 431
Words per stanza (avg) 123
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Submitted on July 19, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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