Analysis of a wanting



when will I see you again
my old friend I miss you so much
my heart hurts from within
you left on a day that was bitter gray
even though in your heart you wanted to stay
but family problems always drove us apart
they all had there opinons right from the start
so I made the decision from my soul within
that I loved you more than family or friends
we moved away to a whole other state
and now every thing between us is great
even our relationship we have with our family and friends
is much more better even than when we began
because they all saw true love in the end


Scheme ABCDDEECFGGFHI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11111111 111101 1110111101 10101111011 11001011101 111111101 111001011101 11111110011 1101101101 01100101111 10100101111010001 111101011101 0111111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 555
Words 115
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 454
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on April 25, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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