Analysis of A Stanzaic Sky



A murder of poets flap feathered verse
in a stanzaic sky; cool blue-toned shrieks
of clouds that wrap language in disrepair,
adverse criticisms hatch distant looks
in minds tethered to herd mentality.

There's no room for the individual
in the delicate nest of pleasured peers
who can not see past their own arrangement,
realise power of another's spells;
syllable sonority, delicious
orthographic regions of space and time.

Dissatisfaction scrambles for escape,
solitudinous stutters inside peace,
and the winds of creativity soothe
interpretations that colour form,
ability transcends stimulation
as methodical enthusiasm
captures melodic rhythms of ideas.

Isolation's divisions laugh letters,
insanity's progression's encouraged,
society's brakes are precision cut,
poetry's the bane of my existence
as I quickly spiral down to the depths
of self-imagery and reckless social
snarls of virtue's cold exasperation.


Scheme XXXXX AXXXXX XXXXBXX XXXXXAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0101101101 00111111 111110001 011001101 0110110100 111100100 001001111 1111111010 11010101 1001010 1101101 001010101 110011 001101001 0010111 010001010 101000100 10010101010 1010110 11010 0100110101 10111010 1110101101 1110001010 1111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 890
Words 132
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 7, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on September 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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