Analysis of A Peek Into Heaven



If only for a moment
Man could peek into heaven
He could learn more than
If he read twenty four seven

The things that would be learned
To accept our chores with a smile
If called upon ask not what's earned
Perform with joy, walk that extra mile

Love and forgive as mothers do
Never think His work is through
You are expected to act like Him
Never let your shinning light dim.

As He did you are to Perform miracles
Heal the sick and move the mountains
Stop the floods, quakes and volcanoes
Stop the troubles of the world.

A wonderful dream but ask you how
I tell you now by being obedient
Evil never was a good
And good never brought on evil


Scheme ABXB CDCD EEFF XXXX XAXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 1101010 1110110 11111 11110110 011111 101101101 11011111 011111101 10011101 1011111 110101111 1011111 11111101100 10101010 10110010 1010101 010011111 11111100100 1010101 01101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 621
Words 125
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on February 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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