Analysis of A Moment in Time



As I gaze upon the comets path
My heart is filled with pain
Knowing she can see it too
My soul begins to rain
I pray she sees the path I see
Looking upon the stars
The comet streaks across the sky
I dream she's not that far
From were I'm at I'm all alone
She may be gazing too
A moment we will share
Together without you
As you look up in the sky
You should know that I can see
The time that we've been missing
This time thats dear to me
This space that comes between us
Time will only tell
The trueth of how I feel inside
Is why the comet fell


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Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 111010101 111111 1011111 110111 11110111 100101 01010101 111111 10111101 111101 010111 010011 1111001 1111111 0111110 111111 1111011 11101 01111101 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 525
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 425
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joe fritz

The things that i write about are from personal experiences or from my heart, and even from my soul I love to read and write, I also write songs. Many of them more…

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