Analysis of A FIELD OF DAISIES (Poem #93)



Daisies in the open field
Are blowing in the wind.
I want to walk into the middle,
But I don't give in.

Some are white with yellow centers
And have a dewy glow.
Others have brown centers
With petals of gold that show.

I'd pick a single flower and
Hope the petals will know,
If he loves me; it may be yes,
Or maybe it will be no.

But I don't want to disturb God's beauty
By picking a single flower.
 With beautiful sunshine on them,
Many will be delighted this hour.

So join me by closing your eyes
And picturing a field of green,
With daisies, white and yellow blowing
In the breeze with gleam.

(c) Copyright by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme XXXX ABAB XBXB CDXD XXXX C
Poetic Form
Metre 1000101 110001 111101010 11110 11111010 010101 101110 1101111 11010100 101011 11111111 1101111 1111101110 11001010 1100111 1011010110 11111011 01000111 110101010 00111 11011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 609
Words 122
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 17, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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