Analysis of A Desire for You...



the tenderness of your touch,
creates a fondness for your heart,
its warmth soothing my soul,
with a passion of excitement...

as I express my adoration for you,
it is your love that I cherish,
with an affection for you,
having no limits,
beyond what the eye can see...

my passionate desire; seeks your heart,
your love, your kindness, your strength,
your weakness, your sorrow, your pain...

such is your love blanketing my soul,
covering the wounds of the past,
your love, I pray will forever last,
as together, we grow complete & whole...

such a love used; to color a rainbow,
to fill a sea, to paint the sky blue,
to fill the moon. to light the stars,
this Love, a desire I have for you....


Scheme XABX CXCXX AXX BDDB XCXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 0100111 01010111 111011 10101010 1101101011 11111110 1101011 10110 0110111 1100010111 1111011 11011011 111110011 10001101 111110101 101011011 101111001 110111011 11011101 1100101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 673
Words 127
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on April 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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