Analysis of A Crazy But Patient and Devoted Lover's Feelings

Mesut Selvi 1957 (TURKEY)



Now my heart is under your love's heavy pressure again.
When I imagine or see you,I remember all of known love songs
And I start to sense as if we will sing them and dance together.
Even though I haven't touched your gentle skin and held your hand,
And even though I haven't huged your attractive body and kissed you,
All of my life time comes in front of my eyes in a moment,
A warm peaceful air covers me and makes me happy unlimitedly,
Just looking at your eyes and charming face or any part of your body,
Gives me an endless delight and pleasure and keeps my soul alive.
And I feel I'm ready to sacrifice myself for a word from your lips.
I can't control my feelings and I feel myself very close to you.
Then, I smell your skin's smell,I breathe and mix it into my soul.
I live in it with a nice hush and relaxed spirit,tasting your love.
I feel your warm breath,I immigrate into your soul when you breathe
I deeply realize that there isn't any peaceful place except your soul
Perhaps it can be very difficult to describe my feelings to you,
Or it may be impossible to gain your love and conquer your heart,
But I want to send you my important and meaningful message clearly:
With an endless love and wish,I'm still waiting only for you.
And I'm still your crazy but patient and devoted lover.And I love you


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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,292
Words 255
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,031
Words per stanza (avg) 249
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Submitted on January 17, 2010

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Mesut Selvi

I was born in Ankara, Turkey; i educated all of my primary, secondary, high schools and also 4 years English Departmanı of Gazi University in Ankara Türkiye/TURKEY. I worked as an English Teacher in different Level Government High Schools of different cities of TURKEY. Now adays, i and my family live in İzmir City of Turkey. Although i am Boeing a retired English Teacher, i also work as a private English Teacher,Tutor and Translator for Private Turkish all type High School or University Students,Turkish TouristicalGroups and also Local Notary Offices/Buros, as an active Free teacher. more…

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