Analysis of 5th Avenue



Someone's Son-
His dark eyes speak the majesty of his soul.
One can tell he's worn a heavy cloak of fears-
And seldom felt the gentle touch of a kind word.
The music of life weaves about him - lingering-
Never to fall upon deaf ears.

He eats his paper breakfast -
Chewing only halfheartedly; staggering-
Washing it down with a swallow of his soul.

Joys of youth forgotten-
Shrouded in the cobwebs of his confusion
They no longer matter in his lackluster world.

Surely there once was a name
that suited him better -
but the countless, faceless passing through
refer to him as "5th Avenue".


Scheme ABCXDC XDB AAX XXEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11110100111 11111010111 010101011011 010111011100 10110111 1111010 10101100 10111010111 111010 1000111010 11101001101 1011101 110110 101010101 011111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 573
Words 107
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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