Analysis of "no thanks"
You came through with your words,
I am with you my son I am in your heart.
You sent me an angel to comfort my naivety.
Nothing could prepare me for this unforgotten word.
My heart has been broken every single day and still I say where are you?
Your as superficial as the words they say.
Cling onto me as I don't thank you for this f***ed up world given by you.
What is the reason for all this strife and indecent suffering?
By the ignorant unwilling masses who accept this by you.
Who look the other way at any slight chance of confrontation.
Here I am again to through the clock at you.
This is my sermon for I have become one for you.
As I lay down my demons, they have been done to you.
For you are that which is in my heart.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 11111111011 11111011011 1010111111 1111101001010111111 1101010111 1101111111111111011 1101011110010100 1010001010101111 110101110111010 11101110111 1111011101111 1111110111111 111111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 715 |
Words | 147 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 14 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 563 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 147 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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