Analysis of "marbled strain"



Where did this start,
am I golden or,
am I so torn apart,
to be so poor.

The love of GOD,
for what I am that,
a divining rod,
visions matter.

Break the heavens,
shine alabaster,
upon the veins end,
heavens master.

Guide my washed hands,
as you lead them to,
your the promised land,
blessed requite strewn.


Scheme AXAX BXBC XCXC XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1111 11101 111101 1111 0111 11111 00101 1010 1010 1100 01011 1010 1111 11111 10101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 290
Words 58
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Steven Louis Chapman

Steven was adopted, his biological father was an English professor who had an affair with a student. Writing poetry is an outlet for his expression of love. A hopeless romantic in search of his soul mate. (it changes from now and then) He hopes to capture the girl of his dreams through poetry. Visit my blog at http://thedailypoetrss.blogspot.com/ for the latest up to date poems. more…

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