Analysis of "C"rite



why have you played such a cruel joke to me
how could it be
why is it that I must see
a light off by the sea

off to to tell & sing
promises of salvation I have seen
the story of why I have sinned
hope for all who have sin

a tale of life of those who stay & sit
a temporary content of life with the light lit
a vision given to those who have seen beyond the slit

a terrible lightning cloud given to my sight
unfortunate ,sad ,disappointing views & ideas tonight

the cruel toll to be aloft the heavenly flight
a fire from the heart & mind to give us might

to be able to feel and gain emotional insight
into the cause of all & the one thing that's right
of how to not to resist the soul,the light & how to have it become a daily fight


Scheme AAAA XXXX BBB CC CC CCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010111 1111 1111111 011101 11111 1001010111 01011111 111111 011111111 010010111011 01010111110101 010010110111 01001010101001 0101110101001 01010111111 1110110101001 01011101111 11111010111111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 714
Words 156
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on July 02, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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