Analysis of Daddy



daddy is that you calling my name
Are you there? Where have you gone?
Did you leave me to fight this world without you
Did I make you mad?
Does god hate me so much he’d take you away from me
Daddy are you there.? Come home to me
Please don’t leave me here
I need you.. help me survive this hurt
Without you I’m all alone in a world
That’ll defeat me and tear me down
They’ll take away everything you taught me
I’ll drown in this darkness without you here
Daddy where have you gone?
Come home to me I need you....
I’m sorry I let you down and now your gone
I didn’t even get to tell you I loved you

By Marlee Clayton


Scheme XABXCCDXXXCDABAB X
Poetic Form
Metre 101111011 1111111 11111111011 11111 1111111110111 101111111 11111 111110111 0111101001 10110111 110110111 1101100111 101111 1111111 11011110111 11101111111 1110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 620
Words 127
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 235
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted on March 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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