Analysis of What I Want
I have wanted you
Since I first met you
Six years ago.
I didn’t know you,
but I know you now.
I didn’t know what I was feeling,
But I know now.
A week out of a year,
and yet I thought about you every day.
Now I see you every day
And there is no way to get you out of my mind.
Do I love you? I don’t know.
Can I love you? I know I can.
Do you love me? I can’t say.
Can you love me? Only time will tell.
I want you to see me.
I want you to see my eyes sparkling when you laugh
And glassy when you’re down.
I want you to know how much a high-five means to me,
even when everyone is doing it.
I want to be there for you when she breaks your heart,
Just like all the others before her.
I want you to be my first kiss.
I want to play video games with you,
to lay my head in your lap while I read a book.
I want you to hold me close while we watch a movie.
I want to hug you when I’m sad,
to kiss you when I’m happy.
I want you to be my first boyfriend,
And my last.
I want to speak God’s holy vows with you,
In front of everyone I love.
I want to spend the rest of my days with you.
I want you to carry me to our bedroom on our wedding night,
to say my name in low and husky voice,
to be as scared, and as excited,
As I am.
I want you to take my hands and whisper sweet nothings as you kiss me.
I want your hands to shake as you take off my gown.
I want our chests touching,
And my ankles crossed at your tailbone.
I want you sheathed inside me,
And your arms as a protective cage around me.
I want a hand in your hair,
And another at the nape of your neck.
I want our kisses to be feathersoft,
Then ravenous.
I want to fall asleep in your arms
every night,
And I want to wake up in them.
I want to bear your children,
beautiful little blue eyes, and curly brown hair.
I want to raise them with love,
And in God’s Word.
I want to see the pride glowing on your face
At the first loose tooth,
When they play in chapel,
When there’s a confirmation,
When they win a medal in a sport,
When they receive a letter,
When they graduate,
When they marry.
When I get mad at you,
I don’t want to stay that way.
I want to write songs for you,
And books.
I want to see your grin everyday in my life.
I want to go on walks with you in retirement,
Our fingers intertwined,
And our hands swinging.
I want your kisses up until the day we leave this earth.
I want your gentle love,
And your hungry need.
I want to be wanted
By you.
“For the Spider-Man in my life”
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101 11111 1101 1111 11111 11111110 1111 011101 01110111001 11111001 011111111111 1111111 11111111 1111111 111110111 111111 111111110111 010111 1111111011111 101101101 111111111111 111010010 11111111 1111100111 111101111101 1111111111010 11111111 1111110 11111111 011 1111110111 0111011 11110111111 11111011101110101 1111010101 111101010 111 11111110101101111 111111111111 1110110 01101111 1111011 011100101011 1101011 0010101111 111010111 1100 111101011 1001 01111101 1111110 100101101011 1111111 0011 11110110111 10111 111010 110010 111010001 1101010 11100 1110 111111 1111111 1111111 01 111111101011 1111111100100 1010001 010110 11110101011111 111101 01101 111110 11 10101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,397 |
Words | 523 |
Sentences | 43 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 15, 15, 20, 12, 13, 1 |
Lines Amount | 76 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 305 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 87 |
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Submitted on March 11, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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