Analysis of Balloons Away

Mayu McDonald 2010 (Arizona)



As I let go of my balloon
I know it won’t return soon
And I watch it sore so very high
I sit I wonder and I sigh
Will I ever be free, free like that balloon?
I know in my heart no, not soon.
It goes and comes but soon it gone
Will this day be short or long?

My day my past I let go,
My griefs my sadness also
But what I would give to go back soon
Is a very very special balloon.


Scheme AABBAAXX CCAA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 1111011 011111101 11110011 11101111101 11011111 11011111 1111111 1111111 1111010 111111111 1010101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 376
Words 87
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on March 11, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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