Analysis of Haiku | Lonely conversation



On the smooth edge of you
redrew moon
silence
then stab.

My soul was torn apart
should it complete
scream
and fall again.

You're missing
is a fruit of wounds
a hurt
not bloody.

You're no longer a way
difficult
to be mapped
silent.

Atambua-NTT, 11 March 2021


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 11 10 11 111101 1101 1 0101 110 10111 01 110 111001 100 111 10 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 245
Words 49
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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