Analysis of Lied



I gave you my heart but you took that for granted.
You spitted a love story that was never your intentions.
Who knew you would keep lying to me.
I thought you kept it real with me, it turnt out you never liked me.
Giving all these haters ammo to use against me.
You should have never lied to me.
You took my love, my soul, my precious time that I can never get back.
One moment you act like a man but instead  your a little boy waiting for someone to hold your hand.

Man you lied to me
Why did  you lie to me
Ol Boy you lied to me

Check this out,  you could never be me. I anit never been scared of a dickless man. You use to hate on me just because I decided to buy a Jag.
Instead of being a man and congratulating me you looked down on me.
When you couldn't take my words so instead you put your hands on me.
I was living in a war zone in my own household.
I'm guessing no one took the time to teach you how to express yourself to a female without using your hands.  
I gave my life to my children what did you do?
13 years ago you threaten to kill my family but I bet you didn't know your 5 year old son saved your little souless life.
 You told your mom all these lies about my household.
You Went around to try destroy what you didn't build which is me.
Remember those people you told them falsified stories to you thought you was doing something right.
Instead, you got shut down because I've build up enough reputation you could never get to me and again never be me.
Boy, don't get me started with the list of your twisted lies.
I anit never call you a liar with no receipts.

Man you lied to me
Why did  you lie to me
Ol Boy you lied to me

When I cried for help, you just left me for dead.
To just go be with a crackhead who ended up using you. That's that karma!!!
All I ever wanted was for someone to  just love me right.
You never gave me a chance to enjoy my life.
Everytime we went out you complain about this and that and it end up in a fight.
It pierced your soul to see us having fun, so you would be what they call a Party Pooper.  
Even your own children couldn't take being around your unhealthy soul.
Your a lost soul that stays lifeless on this broken down world we call Earth.
You will never understand how to live your life, due to the fact your a little boy stuck in your past life.
Instead of letting your soul be free you choose to lie to me.


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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,350
Words 485
Sentences 35
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 3, 13, 3, 10
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Submitted on March 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:28 min read
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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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